I know it's alot to read, but what do you think of my story?

alot of fragments that you shoudl make into senteces. also you have very random things in the most random places it doesnt flow that well. fix all he spellings errors and make a better plot and it should be good. also you should think of writing more there is no climax orfalling action. ( who is tyler taking to prom?, what will the poor guy do about people accepting his uality?, will the two guys ever meet?) questions like thsoe need to be answered